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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

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With the dramatic development of current society, a worrying issue has sprung up to a great extent that the sense of trust among individuals has faded. For instance, when we clap eyes on a lame tramp on the street begging for financial assistance, we will take a skeptical attitude toward the authenticity of his physical condition, and hence few of us will decide to help. The emergence of this phenomenon is due to the prevalence of dishonesty. The public feel exhausted about frauds springing up one after another. And so fearful are they of being caught into fickle traps again. Accordingly, we became excessively cautious with other’s guarantees and ignorant of the absence of trust. Yet, trust is an essential of human interactions, which cannot be established in a single day, whether it be with a friend, spouse or business associate. To cultivate and maintain trust, we ought to be honest in the very first beginning. And then, we should confide in others so as to gain faith from the other side.

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