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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。

用户练习作文:

The past few decades have witnessed remarkable advancement in Internet technology, leading our traditional means of communication into a brand new era: E-communication. It has great impact upon our life. To begin with, Internet communication had broken though the limitations of distance, enabling us to converse at any time like the telephone. Moreover, unlike telephones, Internet service with its unparalleled conveniences allows people to engage and converse with their beloved ones though real-time video chat where our facial expressions are captured to avoid misunderstandings. And all we need for that is a network terminal. In addition, functions above have also been applied to telephones, turning it into more mighty tools in communication. Last, the prevalence of internet has led to some large scale online community platforms such as weibo and weixin, through which we can inform ourselves the latest news, socialize, and even have a glimpse of lives of celebrities. To sum up, the internet has created a virtual world, yet through which the actual world gets a chance to be connected.

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