2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章衔接手法恰当；文章高级词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

On the way to success, some resolve to attain its goal while the others fail. How come? For the former one sticks to its original intention through long periods with hard struggling, yet the latter one is easily discouraged or gives up halfway. Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man with a determined will always has an inflexible spirit. Some of his attempts might fail, nevertheless, he will hold to his objective no matter how tough it might be. To a man with firmness and perseverance, the odds are on success. Diligence means steadiness and successive endeavors in one’s work and study. Life is short and there are plenty of things waiting for us to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can plod the path of toil and pay sustained efforts.