2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文章层次较为清晰。

On the way to success, some resolve to attain its goal while the others fail. How come? For the former one sticks to its original intention through long periods with hard struggling, yet the latter one is easily discouraged or gives up halfway. Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. Good preparation signifies half success. A well-prepared man with a determined will always has an inflexible spirit. Some of his attempts might fail, nevertheless, he will hold to his objective no matter how tough it might be. To a man with resolve and perseverance, the odds are on success. Diligence means steadiness and successive endeavors in one’s devoted career. Time waits for no man. It is with diligence that we get to employ our time efficiently to achieve our purpose. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who dare to plod the path of toil and pay sustained efforts.