2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。
On the way to success, some resolve to attain its goal while the others fail. How come? For the former one sticks to its original intention through long periods with hard struggling, yet the latter one is easily discouraged or gives up halfway. Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. Good preparation signifies half success. Martin Luther King is such a man. Many of his attempts to liberate the black had failed, nevertheless, he held firmly to his objective regardless of the danger he had to confront. Eventually, he managed to eliminate racial discrimination in America, and thus had been remembered as a great national hero. To a man with resolve and perseverance, the odds are on success. Diligence means steadiness and successive endeavors in one’s devoted career. Time waits for no man. It is with diligence that we get to employ our time efficiently to achieve our purpose. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who dare to plod the path of toil and pay sustained efforts.