2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

On the way to success, some resolve to attain their goals while the others fail. How come? For the former one sticks to its original intention through long periods with hard struggling, yet the latter one is easily discouraged or gives up halfway. A resolute faith is essential to success. Martin Luther King is such a man. Many of his attempts to liberate the black had failed, nevertheless, he held firmly to his devoted career regardless of the danger he had to confront. And through successive endeavors, eventually, he managed to eliminate racial discrimination in America, and thus had been remembered as a great national hero. To a man with resolve and perseverance, the odds are always on success. Time waits for no man. It is with these characters that we get to employ our time efficiently to achieve our purpose. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who dare to plod the path of toil and pay sustained efforts.