2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

On the way to success, some resolve to attain its goal while the others fail. How come? For the former one sticks to its original intention through long periods with hard struggling, yet the latter one is easily discouraged or gives up halfway. A resolute faith is essential to success. Martin Luther King is such a man with a determined will. Although many of his attempts to liberate the black had failed, he who held firmly to his devoted career regardless of the danger he had to confront and made massive preparations in confidence, eventually managed to eliminate racial discrimination in America through successive endeavors, and thus had been honored as a great national hero. To a man with resolve and perseverance, the odds are always on success. Time waits for no man. It is with these characters that we get to employ our time efficiently to achieve our purpose. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who dare to plod the path of toil and pay sustained efforts.