可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;全文结构较为严谨。
In old tradition, it is oftentimes a sacred thing to name a child on account of a common belief that names signify the fate of a person. Nevertheless, in current times, people hold diverse opinions on the significance of names. Some still believe that name is of great importance while the others assert the other way round. In my perspective, I maintain names to be of great concern. There is no denying that people oftentimes get an initial recognition from names, no matter with a person or a thing. Everything we know has a name. And I believe that the ancients attach great importance to names for a reason. On the one hand, a good name may be well remembered and add to the attraction of an entity, while on the other hand, a bad name might leave a negative impression and keeps others at a distance in the very beginning. In addition, it is moving to take a glimpse at the underlying blessings that namers give to a simple name.