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With the development of science and technology.,World have changed a lot.So what would the world to be in the future,My opinion are as follows.In this respect of living,We want just live on the earth, and we can liveOn the other planets which were we like.In this respect of eating,We need not to eat too many things to make us full of energy, and we just need to eat a small pill that we can provide us every a nutrition we need.It can keep us fit and make usBeautiful.In this respect of wearingWe will wear something more fashion and convenient.We need to take of our clothes, we just need to use phones to change our clothes instead.In this respect of, transport, we will drive cars without petrol,It is good too, environment, and, we can track control the cars in the laptop, it can be safer and more convenient.Do you think these can be achieved in the future?