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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(2)写作:My Future

发布时间:2013-08-26 18:29浏览次数:286
要求:
每个人都向往美好的未来,你的理想是什么?假如你是李平,请以“My Future”为题写一篇不少于70词的短文,畅想一下你自己的未来。

提示:

1. What do you want to be?

2. Why do you want to be a/an... ?

3. How can you make your dream come true?


      My name is _____________________________________

用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

文章层次较为清晰;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and technology.,World have changed a lot.So what would the world to be in the future,My opinion are as follows.In this respect of living,We want just live on the earth, and we can liveOn the other planets which were we like.In this respect of eating,We need not to eat too many things to make us full of energy, and we just need to eat a small pill that we can provide us every a nutrition we need.It can keep us fit and make usBeautiful.In this respect of wearingWe will wear something more fashion and convenient.We need to take of our clothes, we just need to use phones to change our clothes instead.In this respect of, transport, we will drive cars without petrol,It is good too, environment, and, we can track control the cars in the laptop, it can be safer and more convenient.Do you think these can be achieved in the future?

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