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I have a good friend,her name is Yan.She is very pretty.I met her ,when I was fifteen old.We are classmates and friends.We study and play together.We both like singsing.We love popular star,like LINZHIYING,GUOFUCHENG and so on.That's my great time in my life.She is my best friend forever.Now,she is become a mum,also I am.We still conect each other and spend time on weekend.