希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章层次较为清晰。
I have a good friend, and her name is Yan. She is very pretty. I met her, when I was fifteen old. We are classmates and friends. We study and play together. We both like singing. We love popular star, like LINZHIYING, GUOFUCHENG and so on. That's my great time in my life. She is my best friend forever. Now, she become a mum, also I am. We still connect each other and spend time on weekend.