小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I have a good friend, and her name is Yan. She is very pretty. I met her, when I was fifteen old. We are classmates and friends. We study and play together. We all love singing. We love popular star, like LINZHIYING, GUOFUCHENG and so on. That's my great time in my life. She is my best friend forever. Now, she became a mum, so do I. We still connect each other and spend time on weekends.