小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, and her name is Yan. She is very pretty. I met her, when I was fifteen old. We are classmates and friends. We study and play together. We love to sing. We love popular star, like LINZHIYING, GUOFUCHENG and so on. That's my great time in my life. She is my best friend forever. Now, she became a mum, so do I. We still connect each other and spend time on weekends. When I feel upset, she will console me immediately. When I feel happy, I will share things with her. I think,this friendship is precious.