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It has been a heated argument that wheather it is wise to make conclusions immediately when you hear sth or hear sth. Some people argue that making decisons in hasty will bring lots of problems. It is much easily to make mistakes for hasty mind. Many people feel regretful for their quick decisions. While others proclaim that it is unreasonable to make decisions as soon as possible,since too much consideration may lead to faliure in some cases. Golden chances may fly away for takint too much time to thinking.Meanwhile , an effective plan usually needs well conseideration. In conclusion, wheather it is wise to make conclusions immediately or not should be determined in real situations. What we can do is to think it over before we make up our minds.
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