题目要求:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
题目分析:
表明只能“部分同意”的立场。然后写两大段,举若干个例子。很多的情况下,确实不应该根据外表判断一个人。但也有一些情况下,必须根据外表判断。比如,导演选择演员;招聘零售柜台店员等等。文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Those who think that external appearance is very important might say that a person's appearance is very important. However, I disagree with this statement that judge a person should from his external appearances. There're two major aspects: a person's qualities and a person's work efficient. Firstly, I think that a person's qualities is very important for judge a person. In a sense, it is true that a person's external appearance can give people a good impression. But qualities is more important for judge a person. For example, I have a friend that appearance is not very good. When I first meet he, he's first glance for me is not very good. However, after I know more about he. I find he has a lot of good qualities. That's why I am so good relationship with him. Furthermore, I think it is not useful to have a good appearance such as in the business. Because the thing that your boss really care is your work efficient. Do you think that your appearance can work for your boss? I think it can not. In summary, judge a person should not only by his external appearance.