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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了。
with the development of technology in the world, more and more people are addicted in the network. No matter where or no matter when, human beings seem to be busy with the electronic products, for instance, mobile phones, ipads, computers and laptops etc. Even people stay in together. As the above picture, it can reveal the fact that family relationship is so indifferent. It is a dangerous information for current social. What the child really need is to be love and token care of rather than just simple words. But more often than not, parents are busy or haze, they ignore child inner needs. Instead of the electronic products, father or mother always not face to face contact or communicate with their baby. Actually, every coin has two sides. If only you use it with correction and appropriation, you can gain from the good effect.
