简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意词汇量的增加,文章中拼写错误较多。
Indepandence means let the children do things by themself. When the children were little, the parents would do everthing for them. When they grow up, they learned skills to survive. But so many chirldren can't live without their parents, because they lack of indepandence. So, the parents feel confuse about it , how let their children learn indepandence. When the children were little,the parents could let the children clean the table and wash bowl.