2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；文中衔接词丰富；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用。

the information age When it comes to the internet, an increasing number of people have bacome aware that internet gradually plays an integral role in our daily life. There is no denying that the use of computers advances the development of society.Here are several respects for example.TO start with, the internet is a platform which includes large popularity of information, through which employees would be able to expand their labor pool,which helps a various range of talents find jobs that fits them and this increases the efficienty of labor.What's more the internet promotes the exchange of free ideas and information.Howere, as a saying goes there is no rose without thorns,massive fales information come into the eyesight of us,making us fall for. To sum up ,on no account should we believe whatever the internet appears.As far as l am corncerned, only we use computer properly, can we truely benefit from it.