题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
The Information Age When it comes to the internet, an increasing number of people have become aware that internet gradually plays an integral role in our daily life. There is no denying that the use of computers advances the development of society. Here are several respects for example. TO start with, the internet is a platform which includes large popularity of information, through which employees would be able to expand their labor pool,which helps a various range of talents find jobs that fits them and this increases the efficiency of labor. What's more the internet promotes the exchange of free ideas and information. However, as a saying goes there is no rose without thorns,massive false information comes into the eyesight of us,making us fall for. On no account should we believe whatever the internet appears. As far as l am concerned, only we use computer properly, can we really benefit from it.