单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文章组织结构良好;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。
Play football is my favorite sport , I like to play football by chance. I hold a football when return to home , I am play football with my friends ,I deed like to play football in the age. In the free time , I am go to play race with my classmates . I think play football is happier than everything .Football is very attraction ,it is filled with interest .My biggest wish was became a professional football player