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Playing football is my favorite sport, I like to play football by chance. I hold a football when return to home , I am play football with my friends,I like to play football in the age. At the free time , I am go to play race with my classmates. I think play football is happier than everything.Football is very attraction ,it is filled with interest.My biggest wish was became a professional football player