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Playing football is my favorite sport, I like to play football by chance. I hold a football when return to home , I always play football with my friends,I like to plays football in the age. At the free time , I go to play race with my classmates. I think play football is happier than everything.Football is very attraction ,it is filled with interest.My biggest a wish was become a professional football player