2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

In this day and age, as the economy is growing, increasing people pay more attentions to making life but not enjoy it. It is generally accepted that some facts contribute to these qualities issues. At the beginning, the environment problem is the most indispensable issue we faced at the first. Unregulated industrial growth produced vast numbers of contamination which leaded to surrounding plants, water and even air went bad. Furthermore, these pollution may also have a great impact on human health. Water and air, as essential elements human daily supply, which was polluted during the development of cities. In addition to workplace, individuals are working all the time as long as they can with overwhelming stresses. No one minds whether the other facts of life happens good or not. In their opinion, the most significant issue is the task that will give to their boss. It turns them into someone workaholic. Considering these causes, however, people have to invent something of advanced technology as protection of pollution. Giving that some skills provided to create some machine can produce unpolluted contamination, most of environment would be recover from pollution. In terms of health care, body should have more exercise and swear more to detox the influence of harmful pollution. For instance, government need to organise more activities and set more fitness equipment in the park for offering people to do their exercise. Therefore, stress can also be reduced by doing sports. Learning from these factors, motivating and encourage yourself to adjust the mood of the body. In conclusion, society is a whole community where provided the supplement for human, not only health of body, but also of mentality. The development need to be improve under regulatory, hence, the surrounding and the quality of life can be better.