文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
I'm so glad to meet Sally.Sally is my good friend .She is a very good person that always help us in our study.because of her help ,I get a big progress .She is a beautiful girl with big eyes ,when she simle ,it will take you feel so relaxed.We all love play with she !