小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I'm so glad to meet Sally.Sally is my good friend.She is a very good person that always help us in our study.Because of her help,I get big progress .She is a beautiful girl with big eyes ,when she smile ,it will make you feel so relaxed.We all love play with her !