作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句有点多,从句数量使用不足;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
I'm so glad to meet Sally.Sally is my good friend.She is a very good person that always help us in our study.Because of her help,I get big progress.She is a beautiful girl with big eyes,when she smile,it will make you feel so relaxed.We all love play with her!We are all proud of have such a good friend!