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When it comes to honesty ,people's opinions differ from person to person. Nowadays, people lack of honesty,it leads to a bad situation.Some hold that the honest is not essential.However others view that we should keep the honest because it can bring a lot of benefits ,and people work each other need the honest.We cannot live happy without living with our friends,and our friends believed the honesty man.If we lose the honest,it will bring many trouble,for example,when we get in trouble ,we should somebody lend theri hand to us ,so that we can solve the problem.On the other hand,w e will make many real friends . All in all, the honest is play an important role in our life.
