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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分58.5分
评语:

从句使用量稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;文章用词太过单一,同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Dialects are not acceptable in the Public places. Firsly, if the public places occurs the unstandardable langauages, many people would not listen very understandably. Secondly, the dialects only be spoken in the private places and its own small edge, for example, your family, your town, even your city. However, if you want to speak in the public places, you must speak your standard language. Thirdly, standard language can make you very polite. Therefore, small difference can make you very polite for the other people and very severe for the thing. speaking the standard language is very necessery for us.

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