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Dialects are not acceptable in the Public places. Firsly, if the public places occurs the unstandardable langauages, many people would not listen very understandably. Secondly, the dialects only be spoken in the private places and its own small edge, for example, your family, your town, even your city. However, if you want to speak in the public places, you must speak your standard language. Thirdly, standard language can make you very polite. Therefore, small difference can make you very polite for the other people and very severe for the thing. speaking the standard language is very necessery for us.