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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
“How many more times can we tolerate digitally enhanced characters leaping into the air with their spear or knife drawn to descend super hero like on an opponent? How many zooming overhead shots of fantasy landscapes and 360-degree panoramas can we stomach before we get dizzy? How many more villainous faces and grotesque monsters can enter our psyches before they cease to hold meaning? How many innumerable digital dots now pass for casts of millions (possibly forever superseding the quite literal “casts of thousands” from the days of "Ben-Hur")?.” Armond White, New York Times, June 13,2013
