题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。
According to Porter’s competitive strategies forces (Daft 2013), OTS is threatened by new entrants due less entry barriers of handmade organic food. Moreover, the power of suppliers is low due to less switching cost of OTS. Furthermore, the power of buyers of OTS is high because of low switching cost of customers. In addition, products of OTS has many substitutions, for example, pies that made by machine has lower price and similar flavour with handmade pie. Last but not least, OTS has rivalry among competing firms in the organic area. Thus, although OTS is very popular, it cannot ignore the competitors from the competitive market.