采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下。
Is it not wise to easily come to the conclusion I don't think it is very wise to jump into the conclusion at the first time you met someone or something.There are at least three reasons for that.Firstly,Things change .you should be very patient to wait and watch them until you are sure to have better konwledge of them.Secondly,There is an old saying that thinking twice before action.when you are hurry to push something forward,it will not often lead to a good end.when you are hurrying to push something forward,it will not often lead to a good end.Thirdly,when you came into the final conclusion without thinking throughly ,it will affect your future plan badly and lead you to the wrong way.When you get back to normal ,it will waste your time and energy very much and you will definitely regret that you reach the conclusion so easily and quickly.
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