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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

Thereare numerous reasons explaining this phenomenon. First and foremost, although good appearance is helpful to leave others agood impression in the first meeting, kindness and inner thought are the mostimportant to make friends for all life time. Secondly,many facts reflect that some people with charming appearance make no successfulevents, while others without handsome appearance achieve a lot. Last but notthe least, with thedevelopment of science and technology, plastic surgery can change onesappearance, so maybe the people with sourness only alter their appearance but not develop their virtue。 Admittedly, it is unwise tojudge a person by their appearance. So people should

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