小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.