2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；文中词汇表达不够丰富，有些单词也拼错了。

it's unperfect to make a commentplace by seeing something or listenning something immeditely. we need base on huge details and facets of the affair or event, then estimate and evaluate them without subjective view, make a decisive commentplace finally. we occasially overlook the detail of the event we take notice in unconsionce, because of the lack of patient and knowledge,