2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing everything you have.Putting all you have in one thing equals to putting all the risks and pressures together.That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events.In other words,we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conclusion,it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket.That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.