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Should college student hire cleaners It was reported that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. Seen from this, I can't help thinking why college students can't do this by themselves. As far as I am concerned, students should be more diligent. There are two mainly reasons to explain this. On the one hand, Along with the rapid growth of economy, many parents willing to give their children a better life. So they give as much pocket as they can. In this situtation, it is obivious that students tend to use more. On the other hand, parents are very spoiled their children nowdadys. They won't want their children do any housework even their children at home. It is not surpring that college students don't want to do clean at school. As a result, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion. Parents should tell their children that they should do things by their own. Instead of asking people for help.
