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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
Firstly, i'm very glad with you will visit my hometown. Of course ,please let me introduce some interesting place for you. What made me most interested place is that WUZHEN.There is no doubt that it is well know all of the world. In wuzhen , you can eat traditional food and drink smelly drink. What's more, you can imagine that you put the special clothes on your body.The special clothe is qipao. I'm sure you will pretty buteifull.
