小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is lily,We are often go to school every day, and we are read in the same class,she is very beatiful.she is intested in reading,singing song,she performs good in our scool,her english is very good,in part times she often teach me about how to improve my english.my english level is become better by her help. i thank to her very much,and i pray we can always get well with each other well.