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nowdays,internet has influenced people's daily lives and bring a great change to it .Many young people are adept in using internet to communicate with others. So this eliminate the geography boundary to communicate.People can sit at his own desk and typing the keyboard to talk with others who is maybe thousand miles away. Besides these benefits ,there are some disadvantages we should care about. First the security, young people often using instant messager to communicate with strangers. And after talking with them,they often meet them later in real life,but there is a great risk beneath this behavior.Because you don't know these strangers and what they will do to you.The second question is people may addict to the internet and ignore the real relationship in real life. Often, you can see people burying their head on phone and computer and is talking with others ,but totally ignore the one who is sitting beside them. In a long time ,this may affect their social interpersonal relationship ability in real life.
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