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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4572
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

nowdays,internet has influenced people's daily lives and bring a great change to it .Many young people are adept in using internet to communicate with others. So this eliminate the geography boundary to communicate.People can sit at his own desk and typing the keyboard to talk with others who is maybe thousand miles away. Besides these benefits ,there are some disadvantages we should care about. First the security, young people often using instant messager to communicate with strangers. And after talking with them,they often meet them later in real life,but there is a great risk beneath this behavior.Because you don't know these strangers and what they will do to you.The second question is people may addict to the internet and ignore the real relationship in real life. Often, you can see people burying their head on phone and computer and is talking with others ,but totally ignore the one who is sitting beside them. In a long time ,this may affect their social interpersonal relationship ability in real life.

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