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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
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文中衔接词丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,Internet is popular all over the world.People work,study,and live with Internet. So, many people use it to communicate with each other that is usual. But I think electronic communicatinon can not replace face-to-face contact. Electronic communication is not familiar than face-to-face contact. It is just a email or a short words which has no feeling. We can not see empression and hear vioce between us when we chat. Electronic communication is simple and we can not be sure it's reality sometimes. When we communication with our friends and famlies, they may like contact with ue face to face. Though Internet is full of our lifes, it can not replace face-to-face contact. It like couples are always excited and moved who have long time no seen. Belive me, our famlies and friends are loving to see us but just words.

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