高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

As usual I always watch TV in the Saturday in my home. But now I am in the sun Because I am a high school's student when two days ago.I feel a litter tired and happy beacause I have made some friends. In the afternoon the weather is rainy We stay the classroom. We have sang some songs ,studied,and talked about with each other. We have a good afternoon