Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Resently,there is a report about education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. From the result,we can say that the higher education degree a person have,the more money they earn in generaly speaking. What's more,there is 14.1% unemployment rate in the people who have less than high school diploma. It's a very high rate. But doctoral degree does not earn more than professional degree. So,what can we learn that higher education means higher earning. We must study right now,expecially english