2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi, Lily. I suggest that you to go and climp the famerous moutain- Huangshan. As the city which I am living named Huangshan, it just because of the moutain is in the middle of the city. The mountain has beautiful scene such as steel hill amazing stone shifting cloud and storbun pine. Every day there are thousand and hundred people visiting the mountain. And once a great writer said if you have been huangshan, then there will no other mountain you want to visit. I think you will be excited by what you see then.