- 分享到:
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文章词汇表达丰富，若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。
How can we to be a smart consumer? As the development of the economy in our society and the fast rise if the goods prices,more and more people want to be a smart consumer to have a better life. Maybe today,collecting coupons,group-buy,and buy things on sales special day are not a bad way to save our money. For some example to support these ideas are actually available in our daily life.First of all, indeed,we can get those coupons from some news papers,magezines or just at the stores as long as you squeeze your few minutes out to have it.Then, when you go to the mall to shop,you can use those valid coupons to substitude the cash.Second, i believed that most college students nowadays would like to dine together and it must be pay more for the meal.However, if you smart enough, you would found that there many attractive group-buy online,and it always has a big discount if you buy it online before you go to one of these resturants.I often would like to do that to be a smart consumer and it really a good way to save my pocket money. According to my friends and me,our common experience on this field,saving money.I have already had a conclusion was that if we are not rich man,and there also lots of ways we can make to be a smart consumer,we can use it all to protact ourselves' wallets.
