2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；多多注意文中错误的句子；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

China is a very beautiful country and have many interesting places. But in my mind,I think my hometown Beijing is an interesting city and have many funny things. BeiJing is our captain.So BeiJing have a long history many years ago BeiJing named BeiPing.Now,Beijing have many old things.For example,Beijing Hutong.This place have full of Beijing style. In other country you can not see it. Next interesting place is Water Cub .It was made in 2008.You would better to visit it in the evening.Because WaterCub will colouful and look at so beautiful.And you can go to nanluo south street. In this street ,you can take many delious food and buy many interesting things.Wecome to my hometown Beijing.There have more interestingplaces are waiting for you!