2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力。

Don't gave a comment when you listen or watch something. Because when know the thing fist time ,it cound't be know the thing overall. so if you gave a comment right now ,you maybe gave a wrong result in most cases; As a mellow man,you must sure your conclusion that come from your mouth is right; Because you maybe incharge of the result what your comment result in;Especially when something don't happen to you,please keep quiet;Don't determine who are right an who are wrong,but can not blame someone immediately.You might regret when you know you are wrong.