雅思写作范文:手机与因特网

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Cellphone and Internet With the development of science and economy, more and more people realize that they can't live without the Cellphone and Internet. Especially in the speed time, we could toch any one in a minute by cellphone and go any where we want to go on the internet. Thanks to the morden technology, we can live so simply. While the time is so fast, while there is a hotbed about the main instrument of convey. What do you think about the cellphone and internet. there is no dout that every one who live today must have one of them or both. In my opioions, I would prefer to surf the information on line.