作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;采用了一些简单的从句。
Last weekend,phychologist Kelly Lam hold a report that how chinese student think about sharing their feelings with others. Here are some problems.More than 30 percent of the students don't like to share their feelings with others,no matter it is happiness or sorrows.Why does this happen?It is our education that doesn't give our children much importance of sharing. In the experts opinion,in this society,learning to share is very necessary,because it is beneficial for our children's growth and development.