高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；衔接成分偏少。

My hometown My hometown was very beautiful in many years ago. There are many trees in the street and some fishes in the river. The houses are broken and street are narrow.The human beings were proof in life. Now,there are many differences in everywhere. The high buildings are in the city and many different cars in the street. But,the environment going to worse. In the end, trees were reduce and fishes died. So we should deal with the problem of pollution.