高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章层次较为清晰。

I used to live in a pretty small town with green trees all around it．The river，running through the town，had clean water in which fish could be seen swimming in groups. The houses, however, were small and simple, and the street weren't wide enough to run cars. Person here worked hard all year round yet lived a life of no more than poverty. Now great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings, department stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in broad streets. Nonetheless with the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more serious. A lot of trees are gone, and fish have evaporate because of the dirty water. To our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.